The way her life had been,
She wondered If she would find
A man her heart would win.
And be honest, true, and kind.
She willed her destiny to the winds
Letting nature's fate take It's course.
Something new was to now begin.
A dawning of Intertwined force.
Crossing each other unknowlingly
Bitter pasts began to Idly fade.
Reaching out with all he could be,
Tipped the scales and twisted bane.
Slowly connect the souls of life
Summoning the walls to crumble and fall.
His aura eased the maiden's strife
Cascading comfort with love after all.
Author notes
OPTIONS CONTEST: option 2. my true love and why he is. I feel this man has finally helped me break the pattern of the cycle of abusive relationships i was in for 25 years. The only thing is, will he be my mate forever? Only time will tell.
Contest Option 3 prewrite about my tue love
For Mark, A man i have come to know after meeting and working with him on the movie set Mars Attacks Mt. Pleasant. You have opened up the locks around my heart and have melted the ice in me.
A contest entry
- Today is that day.... by LadyLeviathan.
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nicely written but not real sure how it fits into this picture prompt. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering this into my contest.
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this was nice i liked the flow good luck
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oh my gosh!! this was sooo beautiful!!! than you sooo much!!! good work!
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this is an awesome poem.
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ooooo i love the way this all flowed together! it was brilliant! thank you for your entry! it was amazing. thank you for entering my contest!
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I have to say that I like the first stanza much more than the second one, because it won me over with its complicated simplicity, if that even makes sense. I felt a will and hope to love and I just wanted to go "awww I know that". Great job with that!
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wow
this is really good. I could really feel the pain and worry in the first verse. Then I like how all that is irradicated in the second verse. Nothing left but pure love at its finest. Great write. -
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awwwwwwww this is sweet dear and I thank you kindly for entering the reading list. There is one typo error: Knowlingly should be corrected to knowingly. Otherwise this is beautiful and I love the background.
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WOW...sounds like me, though I havent' found that one yet?? (I'm waiting...)
WELL DONE. It's a great feeling of hope, when we meet the one that overcomes obstacles from our past. Connecting the soul to life, choosing the right courses to take and thanking your journey, knowing it was all meant to be...
is an insight within itself. I follow my intuitions always...
I hope that both of you have a wonderful life.
Great Write...
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i think this is an amazing pome that you did here my friend it is one of a kind golden, keep it flowing i like this
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beautiful
i expecially like the symbolically of the title
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what an enjoyable read
to have true love embtace you as destinywould have it
what a marvelous, warm, embracing experience
i love the imagery and the rhyme
brings up a lot of when i fell in love
but, but, but
"...........on the movie set Mars Attacks Mt. Pleasant"
are you on this planet?
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simply beautiful!
ain't love grand!
well done
keep up the fantastic writes!
♥ UnityHope
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Awwww this was absolutely amazing. I loved it, and it was so beautiful :]
There's so much happiness and love filled in your words, it's just incredible.
"Something new was to now begin.
A dawning of Intertwined force."
Those were my favorite lines. I'm not even sure why, haha, they just really spoke to me. The words you used were great, and they fit well in this poem.
Good luck with you and this Mark ;-)
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Love beats the blues!!
Happiness spilling out and we are glad for you! 
Imagine meeting a real live person to love! 
Amazing! 
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such a familiar theme. im glad you found a way to love/trust again. well written.
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it is so good to read this and to have a bit of hope. i wish you well in htis relationshiip. viyanna rosemarie
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WOW
wow, awsome, i love it, very beautiful.
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Sweet one here. I like it a lot.
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Truely beautiful write,very emotional, thank you for sharing this with us.
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