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Eustis Fl

Windows left open
Tornado warning
Falling rain
Swirling
Its all
Gone
..
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  • Topnotchsy
    August 17, 2008

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    Love the form. Captures tornadoes on so man levels. Firstly (and most obviously) the shape, but also he effect of wiping away what is there and leaving behind far less than was there before. Vivid, piece, and one I really enjoyed!!


    • ebaby
      August 17, 2008
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      Thank you Im glad you enjoy the poem, its always fun to write in this type of form for me.


  • NeverSayAddiction
    September 22, 2007
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    hmmm...

    different...i like it


    • ebaby
      September 23, 2007
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      Thanks for checking this out, I do so love form poetry......

  • goalsv
    September 22, 2007
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    Nice job. Great form poem about the tornado.


    • ebaby
      September 22, 2007
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      Thanks goalsv, its always nice to hear from you!

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