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Wisdom

Melting
figments of
imagination
electrons
phyto-protons
fields of
alpha
beta
gamma
                           
                          r
                            a
                              y
                                s

dissolve
night
resolve
day                      d
                          r
                            e
                            a
                              m
                              s

lavender
touches
                        t
                        a
                          s
                          t
                            e
                            s
of spring
captured
youth

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  • Sonja
    September 22, 2007

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    Different, much different, with the touch of science, love, life and all different senses...all together is making very nice and good flowing poem.
    ~Sonja~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 21, 2007

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    I love this for a few words say a lot good luck in her contest and may it be well rewarded in all areas of poetry..mm


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 21, 2007

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    OOoOH I so loved this write!!! Great entry for the contest Good luck and best wishes to you



    delila


    • liquidmindforever gold member
      September 21, 2007
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      Dear delightfulness,
      How lovely of you to stop in and smile with those happy faces on WISDOM.
      Thank you sooooooooooooooo
      m
      u
      c
      h
      !!!
      Love,
      liquid