Your heart
My love
~United~
Your smile
My dreams
~Destiny~
Author notes
Prompt: Simple Treasures
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on your honorable mention. I like the whole layout and how much feeling you poured into just ten small words. I can tell you are a woman with a beautiful soul. My best, Belle
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It's so easy to dream
thus be this comes to me on a whim
and though I had dreamed the impossible
I have found my bliss
warmly in your embrace
and locked in my heart
who could not want such destiny
and who among us
do not dream this forever -
oh this is very beautiful
very loving and warming and that in itself is a treasure your background and picture make this even more beautiful best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Perfect
I felt so grateful to have a loving husband and to be united. The title is perfect Destiny Fullfilled and then the first line your heart, then the last line Destiny brings this increadible write of so few words have such deep meaning. Excellent job. I loved the picture you chose. God Bless, stavykm
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For just ten words, you made me stop, reread, argue with some thougts, say ahh! an appreciate what you have accomplished.
Love, Tom B.
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this was a beautiful write using few words and it really had the right effect to it
its wonderful
well done and best of luck
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Wow - this is so cool. Great imagery as well - good luck
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MY GOD! I think you're gonna win something with this piece! GOOD JOB.
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Absolutely gorgeous, my friend Wonderfully and beautifully written
All the best to you!!!
Sandy -
For you hold my love in your destiny...simple beautiful. Blows mine away! True love here...~Sie
Good luck in the contest
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