My heart sings
Feel me now
Love me~
Treasure me
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You have a way of finding a wrinkle in my old cold heart and touching it warmly
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10 words....
Wow, with your ten words you described this perfectly. I hope that you are happy with your bronze trophy, you should've won first place, but it's not all about winning, look how many viewers you got! Hope you keep writing. -
Ten words only- not bad, hey. It isn't easy to express oneself in only ten words, and so my hat (if I were wearing one) would be off to you. This is heartfelt- and a lovely image. Nicely done.
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i like it. short, but to the point. and straight from one heart to another. keep it up!
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Congrats on the Bronze...
Soulful Woman -
Lovely lovely
and if the heart speaks...let it's words be what is felt
and what is felt
be words unspoke
but held warmly
in the arms
of love
so it comes to me
and I feel -
being treasured is most definitely a treasure in itself
best of luck in the contest. by the way, the picture you used here is very romantic 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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A beautiful piece expressing so much sincere emotion in so few words
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wonderful so full of feelings inso few words, remarkable...best of luck in Mal's contest...PK
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simply Lovely
Beautifully writte such a few word so filled with emotion and wonder. Great Job My Sister.
*Go with God* sweet one,
Valerie
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Dear sis,
You are so loved in more ways than one! But this is awesome! Love Me...as simple as that! Thank you for sharing this.
Luv ya Cari
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Oooh! Nice take on the prompt. I guess one should consider himself/herself a worthy treasure. Good job! All the best!
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I loved this...The simplicity of it all was so powerful.
The picture is awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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STUNNING WRITING AGAIN
Oh, Sie, that is so very beautiful. Such a short piece, yet it holds such power of deep love and emotion. Wonderful writing.
Wayne
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Adorable little write.
Best of luck.
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