The Land in the Sky
Is like white fluffy clouds of snow
The Land in the Sky
Where angels Roam
The Land in the Sky
Where angels are free
The Land in the Sky
Where you meet Jesus
The Land in the Sky
Where angels frolic through the fields
The Land in the Sky
Where you could be one day
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This was cute, and repetitive. I enjoy the fact that you are sharing a point of view with your readers. All in all it was a nicely written poem, however you could have made it a little more descriptive. Nice write. THank you and good luck.
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