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Summertime Blues

The carcasses
Of dead mosquitos,
Decorate
My screens.

I’m holding out
Inside for now,
Of this trailer
I am queen.

Camping sounded
Oh so fun;
Big fires
And marshmallows.

Now I’m bleeding
For the bugs;
I’m such
A juicy Fellow.

I am listening
With much intent
For incessant
Nighttime droning.

If I could swat
These nasty @#$%!!!!’s
I’d spend
Much less time moaning.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 4, 2007

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    Now! how true this is nice write about these little so and so's but good verses in descriptions of natures features, thank you for entering and good luck in our contests...MM