I love the way he shudders beneath my lips
I feel as if I've touched the sun
beads of sweat wiped from my brow
with this one
he is the one
His tender touch, a pained desire
sings a song inside of me
I graze my fingers on his chest
to its heartfelt melody
Love's most impeccable design
painted by his soul and mine
blind-
that one true love, so hard to find
intimately pantomimed
Thirsting for my lover's kiss
I brush the hair back from his face
my body lost in his embrace
as he takes me to that special place
Merged together, him and I
his name I call into the sky
with little sobbing breaths, we cry-
with little sobbing breaths, we cry
consumed by love, this man and I
My lover's love felt deep within
I begin to shed my skin
I've shed my skin
showing him exactly who I am
the things that I've come to understand
the way true love was meant to be
there's a place in his heart only for me
His love, a love I've never felt before
cradled in his arms, I beg for more-
He loves the way I shudder beneath his lips
he feels as if he's touched the sun
beads of sweat wiped from his brow
with this one
she is the one....
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..She is the one... Wow.I am skin deep in seclusion..You put mr there , bad girl..lol.Very erotic write..sensual.intimate..Wow.wonderful imagery, indeed..You seem to have a gift for sensuality..congrats..loved it
John
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The way you make love is fantastic...
Wow!
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Yes!
The more of your poetry I read the more I like it! His tender touch, a pained desire
sings a song inside of me. You sing your heart, you sing your soul, it's all there before us, so bravely penned! You feel, you know!
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nice....
a circle of desires
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Oh my this is truly spectacular (hope that was right) lol but this was really good.
I just loved the flow/beauty of it.
Favorite lines
"My lover's love felt deep within
I begin to shed my skin
I've shed my skin
showing him exactly who I am"
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this is lovely..this is what I needed..
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