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Promise Land

Up in heaven, I will wait,
Forevermore at the gate.
No hard feelings,
Just memories.
I'll wait for you,
If you wait for me.
Take his hand, he'll lead you so,
Where ever you want to go.
Get on your knees,
Start to pray.
He bled for you,
So you could stay.
You'll be with me once again,
If you come to his Promise Land.
Promise me that you won't cry,
Just for now I say goodbye.

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i hope you guys like it!! =]]

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  • everyone1 gold member
    September 28, 2007

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    Sweet effort!

    I loved the idea of this poem... thank you for entering the contest! Bless you and good luck!

    ~ James ~

    • nsmith
      November 16, 2007
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      thank you!

      Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a comment on this poem!

  • Figaro
    September 22, 2007
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    I like it very much - reminds us to keep praying for our loved ones who are not yet saved.

    • nsmith
      November 16, 2007
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      Thank You!

      Thank you for taking your time to read and comment this poem! And I totally agree with you on that lol.

  • everyone1 gold member
    September 21, 2007
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    Neat!

    Very precious, and forthcoming... I liked it! Thanks for entering...

    ~ James ~

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