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♥Liberated

I am liberated; you made me whole.

your love enraptures my entire soul.

Deeply held within your love's trance;

mold into me and let's start our dance. 

 

Twisting and turning like gold Autumn leaves,

passion is speeding up, quickly, I now breathe.

Caressing such perfect hues,

desire begins to rapidly infuse. 

 

I'm starting to burn up deep inside,

upon your body, my fingers glide. 

Touching you smoothly up your thigh;

I love the way that you beautifully sigh.

 

Melting into a pool of ecstasy,

I want to fulfill your every plea. 

Laying us down on a silken sheet,

our bodies touch, releasing heat. 

 

Nibbling and sucking your sweet lips,

my hands are traveling to your hips. 

Rubbing your luscious skin,

wetness rising from within. 

 

Kissing you softly, and stroking your thighs

moving higher, and entering a finger inside.

within so soft and wet;

you are starting to sweat. 

 

I begin to suck your nipple, moving my tongue slower.

reaching beyond your stomach; kissing it, I go lower. 

Admiring your most intimate place,

Beginning to lick at a steady pace.

 

Faster and harder, as climax is almost here,

whispering I love you so much into your ear. 

Gently pushing in my hand,

my fist wet, I now expand.

 

Moans and screams fill the air tonight;

as we passionately collide by candlelight.

Laying in your arms, lightly we yawn,

Forever we shall make love until dawn.

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  • aeroheadv1
    May 30, 2008

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    *SSSSsiiiiiiiiggggghhhhhh.......*

    Damn, I think I need a cigarette after that...and I don't even smoke! Very well written, very sensual. Dig this one, lol.


  • pain is strength
    December 20, 2007

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    wow... this reminds me of me and my fience`... it is very very very passionate.. and also.. very very sexy!!!!!
    i loved this poem very very much.. and i am continueing on with the rest of your work!!!!


  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    Oooooooh, sissy's getting freakaaay!!!!
    I can't believe this has only won honorable mentions! I thought this was very very errr good, LOL, great imagery and the love definitely shined through. Awesome piece, and congratualtions on the ugly green things! (ugh I hate them LOL!)
    Love yooh
    Jeanette*~


  • Dollbaby4ever
    October 29, 2007
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    I love this poem.


  • A-Sky-Lark
    October 26, 2007

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    i love it, fuckin awesome and hot. has a sweetness to it that I find pretty damn cute. Love it. Thanks for entering.


  • Lick On Her1275
    October 22, 2007

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    heated hrated corporate sex i think you did fabolous with this what i mean by corporate its proper sex not the good raw stuff its great though

  • MxA
    October 19, 2007
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    o.O


  • Tarja
    October 4, 2007

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    This is one of the best love poems I've read in a very long time. And what makes it even sweeter is to see her reaction. That is just amazing to me. How strong you guys obviously feel for each other. The poem really brings that to life but her reaction is just... the icing on the cake I think... beautiful piece. I hope you stay as happy as you are now.

  • amy-01
    September 21, 2007
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    fantastic poem


  • guttermouth
    September 21, 2007

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    Wow... that was a rather warming experience. I thought this was really good, with just a couple of things which I didn't think worked well. The "finger down south" was a bit cheesy, and "steadily" should be replaced by "steady" where it was used. Overall, very nicely done, and very erotic. Thanks for sharing this! ~Eric

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