I'm finding it so hard to move today
Its my first day without your face
I'm finding it so hard to think today
I just want to get away from this place
I want to go where I'm welcome
I want to go where I'm whole
I want to go where you are
I want to go home
This all means nothing to me
What life is there without you?
This all is so pointless
There's no reason for what I do
You don't care about my feelings
It's like you never looked back
I bet you don't even think about me
I bet you didn't hear my hear crack
My heart growls
It's hungry for your smile
I'll look at your picture
That will hold it off for a while
I'm tired and I want to sleep
I want to go where I'm whole
I want to feel your kiss again
Please let me come home
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Oh my
This is such a heart wrenching write for the need to be with ones you love .Great work
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wow. this made me get that whole heavy feeling in my chest. It was beautifully written!!
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Beautiful
I can feel your longing and heart ache, this is beautiful. Thankyou for your entry.
Laura
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well, i think almost all of us can relate to this poem, very soft and beautiful, sometimes we can not do without our baby.
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Emotional. I sometimes feel this way immensely. You've produced your (?) feelings well. Nice job.
Aden Recreated
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