Love's nuggets
heart craves.
Hard to find
harder to keep.
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Prompt - simple treasures
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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simply put
yes...golden is love...hard to find...hard to keep...still what we feel inside is golden...and it should never lose it's glow...if we keep it shiny
never will the heart lose love's light
so be my thoughts
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i have to say that your take is very unique my friend from most everyone else's but that's what's so great about your writing
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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So wise.
Best of luck!
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You're welcome
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Wow. Interesting take on the prompt. I loved the last part more than the first, but the whole piece really draws together to build something really quite beautiful. Good job. All the best.
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oh so true,good job also ..good luck
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"Love nuggets." Very unique my dear
unfortunate how many spend them as fast as they get them. Great entry in the contest.
delila
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