Simple Treasures,
Hidden Measures,
Touched by thought,
Silken Comfort sought
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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cute little though
lovely little rhyme...I never thought to measure the treasures I gather in life...but to pile them like a mountain high...or perhaps...I may only see the little mole hill ive built...still these treasures...are something we can visuaully see...and feel in our hearts...lovely write
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very nice, light and warm. simple indeed ans much said in few words
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for taking time to read my work. Thank you.
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Great little write, good luck in the contest!
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Thank you.
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I thought of bed, believe it or not, when I read this. It's one of the only times I feel as if I am washed away by my thoughts...touched by them...and it's definitely silken. Good job. All the best.
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Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. I feel that way also. My bed is my rest from this life. Thank you.
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very different from what the title was,good job on this,good luck in his contest,MM
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Thank you so much. I hope it is good enough for the judge.
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