Promised unity
within the hands of God's will,
a treasure redeemed.
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Prompt: Simple Treasures
(I love you my Angel)
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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actually this is very thought
filled...death and fulfillments come to me resounding with a joy of forever...we live...we die...and God brings home the gift given us...our souls...so be this thought rumble in my mind...sweetly
Mal -
this is wonderful dear
promised unity is awesome in knowing it is supposed to be and if it is within God's will, that makes it all the better best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Nicely done sweetness, what a beautifully short write. Full of promise of a Love to be. Love you doll....Scott
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wonderfully written and a beautiful take on the prompt giving it depth and meaning
i love how you crafted it well done and best of luck
love you mum
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Wow.
I don't know what to say.
This was really quite wonderful.
Good job.
All the best. -
so beautiful love these words of love good luck to you my sis
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very pretty I assure you, many good lines could follow and this would be the best, good luck...mm
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Awesome words of light weaved together by an angel.
Much love and respect. Peace, Timothy 
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Where there is love, there are simple treasures. Beautiful words. ~Pamela
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Awe... this is so beautiful Sigh...exquisite.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
delila
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Beautiful syllables of love..
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well done my dear sis and the two of you shall be completely together quite soon i'm sure. many loving blessings always xoxoxox
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