The tango's child's play...
You and me?...
All we have
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A lovely thought
to tango with someone you smile and have a crush on comes to my mind..as when I was younger and I could not find words...but at the dance...to slow dance with her...ahoo yeah...sweetly I melted...wordless
so be my thoughts to your words
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this is precious. i just love your closing line. much said in few words
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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very quick! i think you did a very ihncrediable awesome job with this i want to wish you a hand full of gold bags of luck in the contest
theredbookoflove
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I never really thought of the tango as something that's a simple treasure...since it is so hard to learn, but I guess there is something really beautiful about watching other people do it. Wow. Nice take on the prompt. All the best.
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different for sure, good luck
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