Squeezing through bamboo
morning gold nuzzles her thigh
kettle whistling
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is really beautiful, love the imagery, really vivid.
Well done and good luck to you!
Floorboards.
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Thank you Floorboards for stopping by to comment on Chamomile Morning and for those happy faces.
lovelightpeace
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very nice feel to this but not quite sure how to take it lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Wow. This was really a nice read. Good job. Believe it or not...this made me thirsty. All the best in this contest.
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good one for a wake up call in midst of a good morning dream,good luck in his contest mm
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Thank you misticmoonlite for stopping in
and commenting on Chamomile Morning
and that solitary happy face
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Delightful. A precious moment held to simply treasure. Well done. ~Pamela
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Dear Pamela
Thank you for dropping in on Chamomile Morning with your short, sweet comments and happy faces
Love,
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