Tiny hands holding tight
Security
Comfort
"Don't let go, Mummy"
Author notes
Prompt: "Simple Treasures"
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the thoughts of this
little are the efforts a child grasping warmth of mothers love...and to those holding such fragile creatures of mothers womb...come love's devotion...wonderful writing
Mal -
oh this is beautiful and heart touching and almost a little sad
for personal reasons 
best of luck in the contest to you. be well and be blessed
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Wait until they get older, my mom would say, then you'll have a hard time keeping hold of them.
Great work. All the best.
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Beautifully innocent and pure. A simple treasure that is beyond words. Well done. ~Pamela
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Awwww
This is just so sweet.Did a nice job with this and yes that it a simple treasure and a beautiful one thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest,Best wishes
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