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The Tao of OM

Man of brown skin sits
wrapped in white linen garments
reciting o m m m..........o m m m...........

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    October 4, 2007

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    Yes the utterance of 'Om' has such strength.. thank you for the entry and good luck in the ocntest


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 24, 2007

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    very short and i guess this would nail it visually lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed yeah, meditation is a good thing


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    September 21, 2007
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    A short and meditative piece of work. This is the smallest description of Shri Sai Baba that I've read I like the alliteration in L1. Actually, I was expecting to read a much longer poem, so feeling a bit upset. I like L3.

    All the best,
    Charishma