Sunrise
Your child's smile
Hot food
A warm bed shared
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nothing sweeter
than eyes gazing to the smiles of one so young as you wake to a new day...I also thought of breakfast in bed...haha..not sure how to read this one...both thoughts but a smile on my face though
Mal -
all necessary niceties
simple but always nice to have best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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All the basic necessities of life are definitely treasures. Good take on the prompt. All the best!
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Oooh these are all such delightful treasures. Nice work. ~Pamela
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this indeed powerful. agreat takeon the treasure of life, waking up to a new day, seeing the beauty of your childs smile, eating as a family and having a warm bed to turn into at night.
thanks for the reminder..
tory
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