there are many treasures
in this world.
you are one.
Author notes
I guess this is kinda cliche. But I'm in love/infatuation. He's stuck in my head.
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Simple yes but
something I feel we should say to those we love daily...how much these words would take someone to journey the joys...of knowing...they are loved...
and the elation felt by those whom share it...lovely write..
Mal -
cliche yes but silly no. this is very sweet and if he's a treasure to you then that's all that counts
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Great job. It's always good to feel loved...feel needed...and you have written him out as being a special treasure. Cliche? Love is only cliche when it's made up, but your love for him is not...it's real. Good job. All the best!
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i love this...soooo short but so simple and to the point...great work
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When its love, there's no getting it out. Only enjoying the treasure of it all. Well done. ~Pamela
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well thank you
you are pretty good treasure yourself
...see now imagine if i knew you and being all sappy and nuts
Yes they love me though.
Great job here.
Good luck
Tory
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