fluttering like snowflakes
all around,
petals floatting
on the breeze
Author notes
its a windy day today and all the blossoms are floating all around. Its like snow and very beautiful
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
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I love butterflies
not enough can be written about them...or the things they do to our thoughts and to flowers unfurled in the meadows...even on the beach..Ive enjoyed their flutter...on occasion..they have sat with me...on my blanked...love the thoughts brought to me here...
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it produces some very pretty imagery reading this, it sounds beautiful
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Wow. What a scene! I can really imagine this. Quite vivid you are, my dear friend. Quite vivid indeed.
All the best!
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What a beautiful image. I am partial to soft snowflakes and fluttering petals.
What a vision presented. Well done. ~Pamela
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SNOW
omg its like 100 degrees here I want cold and snow
This was a sweet take on the prompt
best of luck to you
Tory
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