A simple little heartfelt smile
Will make another's life worthwhile
In a list
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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how true is the miracle
to a smile...it brings more than joy...hope...with possiblilities....endless are the thoughts they create to they yearning mind...fullfilling to the hearts whom desire....thus be thoughts resounding these ten words penned...
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very nice rhyming here. very sweet, simple and thoughtful. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Love the image of life and a smile together in the same poem! Good luck in the contest!
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Interesting choice of final words!
I never heard of it, but it's beautiful. Great work.
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Nicely said. and "life wurthwhike"
I almost hope you don't change it.
We know what it means, but I like the oooops of it all. ~Pamela
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um wurthwike????
Yikes...*rubs head* is this one of them hidden messages
Love it none theless
goodluck to you
tory
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