treasure barron
love me
for simplicity
you are my
buttercup
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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cute
to think something so whimsicle moves you...simple love is most desired...though intense it becomes soon enough...slowly...the buttercup fades of color...still thrives...wild in the soul...these be thoughts I feel to your ten words of whimsy
Mal -
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet, sweet and simple indeed
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Oh, how cute! I love the last part...sort of like a nickname or something. Great work. All the best.
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Hope is a great blessing to have. Wonderful 10 words. Very moving. ~Pamela
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awwww th sweetness in this dlicious piece. this was a wonderful take on the promt.
Good luck buttercup
tory
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awe so sweet this wonderful a a very simple treasure
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