Pleasure winks
delicate kiss
on waist
in tempt for you.
Author notes
Prompt: “Simple Treasures”
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
I definitely got the drift in just 10 words! Wow, I am going to have to attempt this, I love haiku, but there you have 17 words. 5/7/5 Good luck in the contest, looks like a winner to me!
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Beautiful words! This was simply lovely! All the best
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ah, those are simple treasures indeed
very nicely written, clean, simple and expressive best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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good take on the prompt...very sensual.
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It is difficult to know what to say. This just feels absolutely right, effortless and quite sexy (couldnt think of any other word for it).
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Ahhhhh yes,
simple treasures with such wonderful pleasures are brought to mind in this short and effective piece you penned. Very alluring and seductive in so few words said. You never cease to amaze me and you have done it once again. You have left me with such a big smile after reading this one. Best wishes in the contest with this, it is truly golden. Don't let that ink stop flowing. Love you my friend, Joyce 
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Ooh. Ooh. Ooh. Me like. Me like a lot! Wow. Definitely a simple treasure! Great work, girl! I loved it. All the best!
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short and very well written
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great take on the prompt. I like where you had gone with this. pleasure winks lmao..i love it.
best of luck to you in this contest.
Tory
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