Enchanted blessings...
child's
laughter,
sharing joys
of
reached
milestone
achievements
Author notes
Prompt: “Simple Treasures”
The thoughts were of the severely challenged special needs preschoolers I work with.
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hearing childs laughter
is always a blessing especially when they are your own..blessings come in many forms...but a child is the most precious of them all....thanks for entering this wonderful piece
Mal -
children are our greatest treasures my dear and they should be our greatest joys
i just wish all parents treated them as if they were. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Well done sweet star, you have created a beauty here, always a pleasure reading your heart. Thanks for sharing you, all the best!
-Timothy
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Good job. In every day life, there is always something to be called a special treasure, and you've seen it in the eyes of others who need you and love you as you need and love them. All the best in this contest!
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OH these are truly treasures. Beautifully stated. Well done. ~Pamela
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You are so beautiful... stunning take on the prompt Well done and good luck in the contest.
delila
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beautiful my dear sister. This was awesome and wrote with passion Loved it.
Good luck to you
tory
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A wonderful treasure is to be found in children a lovely simple write
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that is enchantment to me
children laughing, and reaching milestones...so well done on so few words...excellent write!
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"Enchanting"
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