There are moments I miss you
Wondering who we would have been
Where we would have gone
How long it would have taken us to get there
I wait for your answers still
Signs of you listening
I feel you in every breath
And all things
We would have made forever
But we still are
I promise
I'm waiting for the little girl with your eyes
There is a gift in all things "lost"
You brought him into my life
So I could change his
And when he gives me that little girl...
We will have come full circle
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It won't make sense to anyone but me.
Happy Birthday, my Gentleman.
Please tell me what you think
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Hmm. I like the concept of 'all things happening for a reason'. It's the theory of Fate, really. And you know I'm a big fanatic of that.
"We would have made forever
But we still are"
I feel like you're trying to say, in those two lines, that if he had lived, you would've been together forever but are together forever either way. Right? If so, that's a beautiful way, in my opinion, to write it.
I wish my comment was more productive but I'm hyped up on Monster energy drink and can't really focus. I loved the poem though. Glad you broke your writer's block.
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That's exactly what I was trying to say, my dear.
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