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For Grandma

Lay down your withered hand
Upon my bloodied forehead
We meet again at the gates of eternity
But I do not belong

I look within you, not directly to you
For your eyes tell far greater a tale than Homer's Iliad

I feel I have disappointed you
With my thoughts, with my actions, with my words

But you never disappointed me
And you never will

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    May 6, 2008

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    This is a very sweet poem!! You embedded a great amount of emotion in this poem probly more than i know!! Keep up the good work!! I look forward to reading more! Jess