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Melvin the dragon at the cricket

Melvin the Dragon is watching the cricket
Martha's along for the ride
Melvin his hoping they won't lose a wicket
Martha's asleep by his side
Melvin in dreams would open the batting
Martha goes shopping for shoes
All of the fans are enjoying their chatting
Martha's enjoying her snooze!

The balls not a good one, the batsman has thumped it
Ever so high to the crowd
The batting's been good but that shot has trumped it
The fans are cheering aloud
The ball's coming down it could be like murder
If the ball hits a head in the stand
Martha wakes up, the cheering has stirred her
Catches the ball in one hand
She doesn't stand up, to throw back their missile
Bowls it from her seated pose
Speeds through the air like a rocket that's fissile
Straight at the poor keeper's nose!

Melvin the dragon is watching the cricket
Martha is playing the game
Everytime Martha can bowl out a batsman
Melvin can bask in her fame
Martha's a marvel a bowler that's fiery
Clearly the star of her team
Melvin's so proud of his girl to admire he
Has ordered another ice-cream!

Author notes

You don't need to be a cricket fan for this one!

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  • JinxyCat gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    I liked this ... it was really cute and innocent ... I loved the flow and rhythm ... it kept up very nicely ... thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest ... Much Love - ♥CC♥

  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 21, 2007
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    Martha has one little problem
    She's blind to most colours you see
    She couldn't care less if he's blue or he's pink
    It's his smouldering love sets her free

  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 21, 2007
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    Marvin now watches his Martha
    As up to the wicket she'll stride
    Gloves in place, bat in hand
    His heart it swells with such pride

    • cricketjeff gold member
      September 21, 2007
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      Martha the dragon's a quite awesome bowler
      Bowling with fire and hate
      Martha the dragon's a kitten for Melvin
      Fat blue dragon lovers are great!

  • Tattboyspet silver member
    September 21, 2007

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    LMAO - after watching SA vs India last night with the 20/20 in SA - I find this even funnier
    well done on a wonderfully light write


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 21, 2007

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    Martha walks up to the crease with a passion
    Melvin he sits taking notes
    Martha her ball all red and shiny
    Melvin on Martha he dotes


    • cricketjeff gold member
      September 21, 2007
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      Martha's a much better bowler
      She bowls with passion and fire
      Melvin just sits there and watches
      His heart is alive with desire
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