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twilight

shotgun full of stars
piercing the black cloak of Night
kills lonely moonlight.

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  • jeii
    November 2, 2007
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    VERY MiXED FEELiNGS BUT EiTHER WAY, i LiKE iT. VERY BEAUTiFUL HAiKU. THANKS FOR SHARiNG!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 23, 2007

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    unusual

    sounds bitter and disoriented,twilight is a very pretty part of the day,thank you for entering and good luck...mm


  • risewiththesmoke
    September 21, 2007
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    thanks for entering