Mummy whats happening to me
why can't I move my legs
why is my dress ripped
Mummy my belly hurts
I think im going to be sick
Mummy what are those flashing lights
who are these people Mummy
what do they want
Mummy why aren't you answering me
whats that red stuff coming
from your head
Mummy whats going on
whats happening to me
why are all these people shouting
Mummy why aren't you answering me
please Mummy please
I'm scared Mummy
Mummy whats all that glass
Whats going on
whats that noise
it sounds like Daddy's got the chainsaw
but Daddy's not here Mummy
why is that man cutting the door off
Mummy make him let go of me
Mummy whats going on
Mummy answer me
please answer me Mummy
Do I have to go in the ambulence Mummy
Why aren't you coming with me
Mummy I'm afraid of doctors
can you hold my hand
Mummy why aren't you answering me
why aren't you coming with me
Mummy the man told me
that your in heaven
what does that mean mummy
can I go there too
please Mummy
I want to come to heaven and
give you a big hug and hold your hand
I feel so sick Mummy
The doctor said he has to put
some white stuff on my legs
he said i'll be in a wheelchair for a while
Mummy why aren't you with me
Im scared of doctors
can't you hold my hand
Daddy's here now Mummy
I think he wants to see you too
He keeps saying your name
Why is he crying Mummy whats going on
why aren't you here to hold my hand
You know I'm afraid of doctors Mummy
A contest entry
- Make me cry by xHeartofDarknessx.
300 points, ended September 21, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was really touching... so bvery touching. It touches my heart, So sorrowful... really made me cry... beautiful
~Candy
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I can feel the anxious and restless vibe... it's scary and very sentimental at the same time... Good work...
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very very very touchin.. this one makes me cry.. excellently written though..
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wow,I think the message you were trying to give, came out perfect.
I dont know many poets who can write like this, and get it right, well done, thank you for sharing and Good Luck!
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