Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Past Reminder

I remember the anger of a child
  who's ignorance brought on horrifying images of hatred,
I remember the time when the wounds no longer healed,
  and vengence was blind,
I remember how the torture of reality transformed itself into images of fantasy
  that collided from inside to reveal the lost agony that was no longer there,
I remember the thirst to live among human crualties
  and feel the power of a determined soul sink into a relm of pain,
      and be washed away by the falling heat of death,
I remember the haunting memories of a lonely child
  whoes iced tears reveal the sacred secrets of today.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • NerdforChrist777
    November 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    well it was good, but i would have given you more applause if you had made it rhyme. it was good otherwise