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Fairie Awakening

Wild  beats  the  heart  of  the  wee  daring  Fairy;     
Flitting through meadows of mortals and mist;
Strong with the will to be going and doing;
Driven by longing too strong to resist.
Bright are the eyes of the childlike winged creature.
She's ever vigilant; never at rest.
Searching  forever.¬  For what She's not  sure yet.
Knowing Her whole life depends on this quest.
In the sweet meadow, lovers lay sleeping.
Wet with  the  dew  and  the  passion  they  share.
Found by the Fairy and studied for hours.
Now She understands "what" and is searching for "where".


Author notes

I used the Nene Thomas picture you posted. "Love is a battlefield."
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  • Lorien
    July 29, 2008
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    First of all thank you for entering
    This is such a great poem


  • LadyKate
    September 21, 2007

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    This poem is amazing. I really enjoyed the last line. The poem has great rythm and I respect you awesome rhyming ability (I can't at all) This poem is beautiful. Thank you for entering and good luck!