You say I’m not cool, but you are
That the girls you hang with
Look at me in disgust
I’m not good enough to date,
Not good enough to be seen with you
But I’m good enough to try and fuck
In the front seat of your God damned truck
You say you notice what most guys don’t
You notice I struggle with fitting in
And you notice the scars on my wrists
No, I don’t have a lot of friends,
But don’t pity me with your friendship
I’d rather be liked for who I am
Than be your friend because you feel sorry for me
You say you would hate to lose me as a friend
That you’d rather have me as a friend than nothing at all
You say you’re different--
Try being friends with girls
Who don’t look down on someone else
Just because they’re different, not like they are
Maybe then you’ll be different
So you know what I say?
I say fuck you, and that’s not an offer
I say you are just like all the other guys
You don’t like me because I’m me
You like me because I fooled around in your truck
And you automatically thought I’d do it again
You say you’re different---then why don’t you prove it?
Author notes
Pretty much yeah....
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well done my friend well done. i like the way it sounded as i read it aloud. dude up top the chain of command knows ive felt this way about people treating me like this...then i tell em to F**K OFF and i walk away before they have a chance to explain their feelings
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Good girl ... You just tell him like it is ... I am so proud of you ... This took a lot of courage to write ... I can totally relate to this piece ... I felt the same way about "friend" ... and guess what ... I'm 25 ... and I still feel that way ... My first impression about this piece ... was instantly .... YOU GO GIRL ... I knew you were going to tell him off in this poem ... now ... if you can do that in real life ... I will give you a thousand thumbs up ... You really did an amzing job with this one ... Very well penned ...
Chantelle
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Thanks babe, I really appreciate it.
And I almost sent this to him in what's called happy mail at my school. Butttt,that's not Christian like, and as upset and angry as I am, it would be wrong to do so. I wrote this for me, not him...
xoxo
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Brava, Jennifer!
Definitely shows your anger and disgust towards this guy. Most men are like that, sadly, and they never pove you wrong. You did a fantastic job of letting us feel your anger and anguish behind said lines.
Ending line really capped it off well. It can go with towards everyone and you'd be surprised at how many can prove it....
Nicely done once again. Best wishes to you in everything you do.
Always and Forever,
Aqua Tinted
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Don't you
"Aqua Tinted" me, missy
That's wayyy to unpersonal for me -
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grah It's become a habit >>
♥ you babe.
- Kristen
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Nice, I bet it feels good to get it all out. I know exactly what you mean. when people say hey I'm diffrent, ususally that means they aren't I'm sorry you have to put up with such a terrible guy becauyse thats not fair at all. I really liked the last line alot. You say you’re different---then why don’t you prove it?
I could feel the anger like rediating off the lines, awesomne job!!with love and igggles, the whtie rabbit
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