His eyes are deep dark green
And He loves all that he's seen
He'll never know how much I care
And tell how much...well I don't dare
His heart is a wonderful thing
Joy is all it brings
His eyes are filled with laughter
I watch him from the rafters
He is my baby doll
My best, my darling, my friend
And my love for him, it will never end
Every day I am torchered
But I simply can't come forward
I would die for him
But would he die for me? The chances are slim.
A contest entry
- Make me cry by xHeartofDarknessx.
300 points, ended September 21, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very Well Writen
it was very hard to decided the winner
but all in all evan though you were all very good
and hope you will enter my next contest comeing soon
so i am now saying tank you for takeing part in my first contest
Kepp up the good work
Thanks
xBx
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oh my goodness
this is so sad and beautiful and romantic and tragic, gosh~~~~~
I had to read it outloud, it sounds so lovely in the air.
you drew me in on the first two lines,
~sigh~
wuvs,
Cassie with the tearfilled blue eyes
*peace*
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thats a great poem the ending is so saddening
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awww huggles for my little brother!
unrequited love sux assholes!
well done tho, and good luck in the contest!
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