if only
your eyes would swim to me
rest in the cup of my gaze
even for a moment
i would never
snatch you from your world but
merely marvel in the light sensation
of your shimmering presence
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Wonderful
Sounds like true adoration. It was terrific. Very lovely. -
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Well, it was a moment of infatuation. Until I met my fiance I suffered from quite a lot of those moments.
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Succinctly perfect,
flooding the mind
with the light you describe!
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"snatch you from your world" is my favorite lines of your poem,,, i really can relate to it coz i've always wanted to do this to someone... if only i can..
i love the way you had constructed your poem for it is simple yet strong for those who can relate to it..
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Oh, how I wish my mind worked as yours does! Again, simply beautiful - and I will not post my own poem in your comments in a vain attempt at competition. How lame! celtic queen
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If only
The sweetest words pull
Tears of emotion, pouring from your eyes
I'd devour you in love, in spirit
Again,
I would never lock you away as my own
But help you out of the cocoon
You've grown acustom to.
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if only whispers could be closer
joining the night and day
of different places
the sweet sound of a lullaby
would follow your dreams
through time and space
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