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My Angel

I'm aching,
for the touch.
I want to feel,
your fingers slip through mine.
I want to feel,
your lips touch mine.
The way your skin feels,
against mine is crazy.
You give me this ecstacy,
an ecstacy of bliss.
Every curve,
I wanna follow along.
Touch you the way,
you wanna be touched.
Make you feel the way,
you need to be felt.
I want to feel,
your hands on me.
I'm aching for that one touch,
to send shivers up my spine.
I'm waiting for that moment,
that special moment.
For now,
I'm fine with the high school love.
Holding hands,
walking to class.
Kiss before class,
for good luck on your test.
A smile of joy,
shows me you care.
Your lips against mine,
feel like ever lasting sweetness.
I wanna send those shivers,
up your spine.
I wanna give you those feelings,
that you long to crave.
I'm with you,
and you're with me.
Nothing will change us,
I promise you that.
I promise you,
I'll give you those feelings.
You're my lover,
and I am yours.
Let me love you,
the way you want to be loved.
Let me kiss you,
the way you want to be kissed.
Let me touch you,
the way you want to be touched.
I am done,
writing this for you.
My first poem,
for the girl in my life.
Smile,
as you read these words.
Remember,
our first kiss.
You are an Angel,
and I'll give you wings.

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My Angel was written for Candi, my true angel

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  • Abe 1
    September 21, 2008

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    give you wings like it
    very nice dedication to Candi
    cheers and thanx 4 yr entry
    abe