calling on the phone
no answer
tell me whats wrong
Author notes
emotion-worried
A contest entry
- WORD ECONOMY CHALLENGE! Ten-Word Poems... by TooRainbow.
675 points, ended September 23, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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Well done!
You perfectly define 'worried'. One aspect of worry that is often overlooked is the part where we jump to conclusions. You capture this beautifully. When we worry, we don't consider the practical, logical, or probable possibilities. Our minds go zero to worst-case-scenario instantly. "no answer / tell me whats wrong". Remarkable work! Thank you for entering this!! Great job!
Sheryl

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O.O
I think i know who this is about......-_-
i'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!
*ok, it could be someone else completely altogether*



