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Not really a poem

So much time away from her
and it wears my mind
I stare at the walls
Imagining a world where
She is with me always
In my dreams I see
My killer, and her face
echoes in my eyes.
I am invincible, but
She breaks through my
walls without even
trying.  I wish that
I could live with her
forever for days beyond counting.

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Just random thoughts on the subject of the most amazing person in the world.

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  • bleed-it-out
    September 23, 2007
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    how sweet im glad you have these thoughs...


  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2007

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    Just random scribbles are ok and let people know what you're really thinking. I miss you too, so much my love! But we can do this and someday we shall always be together, forever and ever.