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Does she know?
The stream still flows
The tree stands still
Watching with an invincible will
The tree wonders many things
As the water sparkles like fairy wings
Smooth and cool always flowing
the tree stands unknowing
If the stream understands
The way his roots form a band
From shore to shore it goes
A cross and under the stream as it flows
So the tree asks "Does she know?"
That she will be loved wherever she goes

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  • Onomarith
    December 20, 2008

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    oh mine!!!!!!

    this makes me cry with bliss and with sadness at the same time!
    what an expression, GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    that she will be loved wherever she goes; i wished i were the loved one!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2007

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    Wow! This is by far one of my new favorites! The descriptions are amazing. So many pictures come to mind when reading this. You are such a talented writer. And yes I know that everywhere I go I carry with me your love.