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Amalia's Fire

Where inside you does the flame rise?
Twisting, burning, consuming all inside
The flame I see behind your eyes

Where inside you does the fire burn high?
Searing your control, heat, unbelievable tonight
The fire you inspire vaults to the sky

How did you catch my soul ablaze?
And create in me this dreamy haze.
It is very difficult when you are gone for days.

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2007
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    Wow, the imagery here is amazing. The ryhming stays true to the natural flow. Sweet, I have a poem named after me. A beautiful one in fact. The flame you see behind my eyes is the flame that you have ignited just by being with me, my love for you is deep.