Your charm entranced everyone
I fought and fought
But I knew I was one of them
The spell you cast was unbreakable
Who knows what promises you
Whispered to moonbeams
To gain my affection
Or how you so bewitched me
With your silver laughter
And dazzling kisses
Your allure is much too powerful
To escape, even if I wanted to
And even if I tried
There's no way
I could unlove you
Author notes
option 2-title "unlove you"
option 2-falling in love username:tigress3737
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This is really good!!! My favorite part is Your allure is much too powerful
To escape, even if I wanted to
And even if I tried
There's no way
I could unlove you
Definitly awesome!!!
Great job, and good luck in my contest!! -
This reminds me of someone... (Good job!) About how you didn't want or try to love them. Lovely write.
Thanks for entering,
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I really like this poem! My favorite lines would have to be: To escape, even if I wanted to
And even if I tried
There's no way
I could unlove you
Good luck in the contest. : -
Ah, I love this image -
"Whispered to moonbeams
To gain my affection "
Great expression of a feeling many people could probably relate to. I also like the vivd image of 'silver laughter'- love the way you've given something abstract a tangible quality.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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love it
this is an awesome write
i know a guy like that
i wish that i could unlove him
fabulous
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