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I am the Stone

As the wind moves across the sand
And moves it out toward a distant land
The sun moves toward twilight
Embracing the world in a velvet night
Alas for morning, it lies far ahead
So much time before the darkness is shed
A piece of dull metal is faced to east
Waiting to absorb a ray of light at least
It happens in a moment, the sky is on fire
And so the stone shines as the sun rises higher

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2007

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    Oh wow, this is so beautiful. Love the imagery, twilight, velvet night, etc. Also the sybolism is very intersting. Great write!