Searching for knowledge
Completeing yourself
Having the time of your life all along
Our life begins
Or seems to end
Learning how to just get along
Dreaming of whats to be
And hopeing for the best
Zealous of those around us
Everything that is molds us
Author notes
I used the prompt to make an acrostic
A contest entry
- Thursday Night Quickie by CitrineSunrise.
450 points, ended September 20, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice job on the acrostic, just a bonus
"everything that is molds us" wonderful line best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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I'm glad you pointed out the acrostic. I enjoyed your poem and I might have missed it. "Everything that is, molds us" is a fitting ending to this verse. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Your prompt is: SCHOOL DAZE. Good luck.
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