I wish I could have closed my eyes.
Then I wouldnt have seen you die.
But thats not what happened not at all.
I held you in my arms and started to ball.
The tears stained my cheeks.
I cried on and on for many many weeks.
I held you close to me as deep red liquid stained your shirt.
I never knew how much losing you would hurt.
But know that I know suicide is always on my mind.
To me the world has never been kind.
So I can join you I say my finals good bye.
I'll whisper to others not to cry.
Author notes
This poem..is important read it carefully to understand...
A contest entry
- PICTURE TAKE OFF by Whispering Wind.
750 points, ended September 25, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - loss of love by LanguishedLad.
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thanks
Thankyou for entering this contest and best of luck in the comp. I am sorry to hear of your loss, I really liked this poem and I hope that things are getting easier for you.
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who are you talking about here?
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don't. do. anything. stupid. I love you. just keep hangin in there.
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I wont...I'll keep my promise.
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Little sis, I love you. This is a good write.
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don't. forget. your. promises. He's always in your memory. just don't lose it.
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this is a good write little sis. But if you do this I will seriously kick some butt.
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There is so much pain in this poem it hurts me to read it!...I just got of the hospital myself...I came so close to dieing and trust me you dont want to face that!You are a wonderful poet! Thank you so much for entering
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this is so sad,suicide is never a good move,someone always gets hurt even in dreams,thanks for sharing and good luck mm
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