Overwhelming heat
Hot sand fills my feet as I
End my summer’s quest
In a list
A contest entry
- haiku by risewiththesmoke.
300 points, ended September 28, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This gives a very pleasant feeling...Like it!
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My pleasure. Haiku is fun
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Sure is...i like haiku too
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Another summer come and gone as the leaves begin to fall from the trees here in New England. I haven't read any haikus in a while and this was a wonderful treat. Now I want to go to Jamaica and feel that hot sand filling my feet.
It's been a long time since I was there, I can still picture it like yesterday. Thank you for sharing this beauty with all of us and best wishes in the contest. It sounds as golden as the sun. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce 
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Thank you - I love St. Lucia and Barbados. It is such a feeling that I'm trying to retire on one of them. Thanks again my friend - Luv & Hugs ~ Mykeee
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