Hold on to me, my love
your warmth wrapped up in angel wings
It's time to go now, love
Leave behind these senseless things
If you decide to go back
I'll be right here waiting for you
But if you never turn back
I'll always find more belief in you
Your love is endless like a fire
Burning me to ash,
to ash, to ash
Your love is endless, it's all I desire
Turning me to crash,
to crash, to crash
Back into your fire
To crash, to crash, to crash
Back into you
Don't you cry, my love
You know I'll always forgive you
You can move on, my love
And that I'll always have a reason to prove
That if you decide to go back
I'll be right here waiting for you
But if you never turn back
I'll always find more belief in you
Your love is endless like a fire
Burning me to ash,
to ash, to ash
Your love is endless, it's all I desire
Turning me to crash,
to crash, to crash
Back into your fire
to crash, to crash, to crash
Back into you
Your love is endless like the fire
burning me to the ash
Your love is endless, it's all I desire
Turning me to crash
Back into your fire,
To crash, to crash, to crash
Back into your fire,
To crash, to crash, to crash
Back into your fire,
To crash, to crash, to crash
Back into you...
Author notes
I loved you, I really really did. And as much as I try to love myself, I can't. So until you make me move, I'll stay right here for you. I wont say I'm sorry, because it wasn't at all my fault. I will say I love you no less then the day I said those three words. We've parted now, but you can't seem to budge, can you?
So now, we're both right here, aren't we? Silly to even point it out really. But in the time you just stand there, motionless, do you realise that your burning me? The warmth is atleast pleasant... if not suidicidal of sorts...
I wouldn't take back a single day, not a single moment. I regret none of this, and will cherish that darling face of yours. I'm sorry I made you cry, but in comparison of tears, you truely are no competition for mine.
If you have any suggestions, tell me
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I can tell that you want to be a song writer about just as much as me. The lyrics were beautiful. Ha, lucky girl who broke your heart. Sorry for laughing, but mind, I've had many crushes that liked other girls. I wasn't popular and I was ugly. God, they really killed me.
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Delicately Gorgeous :D
Wow. This is a breathtaking masterpiece. What a phenomenal write.
! I'm really impressed. You caused my heart that was frozen with the pain of my own similar situation to beat slowly causing myself to nurture the love that killed me. ! I had long forgotten how to feel these things or how to allow myself to feel this..nor had I ever imagined I could ever feel it again. Thank you so much for writing and even more thanks for posting !
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Dang, that's freaking awesome. Sorry to hear how heartbroken you are. Only time can heal..usually.
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Hey, that's life for ya I'm well beyond and over it
Thank you! Thanks so much!
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Well that's good. I'll be reading more of your work later.
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Put this to music, you definitely should. It works so well, the rhythm is perfect and it is just the right length.
Holly.
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I might one day. Thank you so much!
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wow...
This song is very moving, and could be taken many different ways. You seem to have a passion for this person, and that's something that merits applause in itself. Well done! A very sad, and also slightly hopeful, piece. I look forward to reading more from you.
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it reminds me of sth..
tell ya later about it..
great write.. it makes me feel like singing a sad song.
sherry
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Ha. I'm about to cry now....during this moment in time,I cry,I'm mostly down,and this really perked me up.
Thank you.
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BrownSugarNileKat
Thank you very much ^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed this. Your better-mood is an even trade off. I'm really enjoying all this positive feed back. Thank you.
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Bravo!!
lovable. it actually reminded me of someone i care so much about. it kinda brightened my day :]
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xblackxrosexremainsx 'Bravo!!'
Really? ^.^ I'm glad that you think of this as the universal idea of love, instead of an individual person. I'm stoked I can get any thought accross. Thanks so much
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wow. this is amazing.
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foreverxnow
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it
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this is really sweet...I was soo happy and now I'm tearing...this piece is so sweet and ahhhhh so nice...I always like your lyrics...soooo cool
Later B
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bloved
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I always take to heart what you say above alot of people, being another person with a fascination with music yourself. It's always good to get feed back from a level playing field. Thanks again.
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I loved this write. I read your notes on your poem and that kind of sounded like it would make a good poem as well. Keep up the good work.
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I will stand by you
Thank you! Really? Ah, well I just wrote what came to mind (Speaking of mind, mine is a small, fragile being, so I have to get it all out before it breaks ). Thanks so much!
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I really liked this poem, except for the first verse:
"Hold on to me, my love
your warmth wrapped up in angel wings
Now it's time to go, love
Leave behind these senseless things"
It didn't quite flow as nicely as the rest of the poem did -
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sinnocence
Yeah? Eh, you're absolutely right. Thanks for pointing that out! Now, to spend the rest of my day and possibly part of tomorrows to try and figure that one out Thanks so much!
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this was so effing beautiful, I just about started crying.
I can't do love real well [although I can do bitter]
good show!
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Manorexic
You really think so? Thank you so much!
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thanks for sharing
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mmook
And thanks for the comment
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WOW!
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Sarcasm730
By your screen name, I don't know what to say your comment would be, but I'll take it as a compliment until proven other wise! Thank you
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WOW such a compelling pieceof work here I promise you that
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hurtgurl
Thank you so much!!
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