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Clipping his Wings

I found love in your blue feathers,
  My sweet little flightless angel.
I don't suppose you remember my tears,
  as we stole your mastery of the air.
I'm sure you only remember how I held you,
  how so remorselessly I let them cut you.
Your grace surgically removed, you stumbled
  and I found how much hatred I held for myself.
You are beautiful still, my flightless angel.

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I was just remembering when we clipped my parakeets wings for the first time in 7 years. Yes, I cried. I held him and sobbed. It was awful. I've never felt so terrible about something so silly before. He's slowly growing his feathers back, but he's easily excitable so they have a tendency to break.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    January 19

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    This is a great write. I've had to cut flight feathers from parrots too, and I suffered more than they did. I now can't keep birds, prefer to see them flying free.

    The emotion was shown here beautifully.


  • delightfulmess
    September 20, 2007

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    WOW what a great poem This shines with talent and emotions. very unique.
    this.
    Great job here.


    delila