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Revelation

Unwilling to forget 
Tales of certain distress
The darkest form of regret
Will eventually confess

Dancing 'round the dark room

While something fades in
A light so bright to consume

Will expose the rotting skin

 

The loathing corpse caught

Trying to flee again

Becoming distraught

As the light reveals... sin

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Light upon shadow dies

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  • Asfand
    September 20, 2007
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    powerful and wonderful...love where you went...creeping along corners and shadows!!