She's presenting her life for little use
on a page ripped from a scrapbook
littered with prepositions.
Showing only in
pinpricks of light
through dog-chewed fabric
&& destroyed biros.
Teeth marks are this week's fashion
- Or hadn't you heard?
Author notes
Prompt::
"You're a cold piece of steel between my ribs and there's no saving me" - Rob Dougan (Furious Angels)
A contest entry
- *Insert something interesting here* Quickie by Exodus.
525 points, ended September 20, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Only 9 lines!!!
This was so good too!!!
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ARG SHIT! I counted wrong... damnit!
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Has a nice flow, I liked it.
Good job
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