I'll be brief.
Speak in terms that
(hopefully)
you'll understand.
Although I ache,
for coarse hair running
navel-downward,
somethings aren't meant
for people like me.
(or perhaps anyone)
Author notes
Prompt::
"You're a cold piece of steel between my ribs and there's no saving me" - Rob Dougan (Furious Angels)
A contest entry
- *Insert something interesting here* Quickie by Exodus.
525 points, ended September 20, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excellent take on the prompt....Would not have thought of it this way myself...
All the best!
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Oh wow. This is great. Not something I would have thought of given the prompt, but I love it nonetheless
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